- Good production track makes you nod your head
- - tmgraham from Stone Mountain, Georgia
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- not bad!
- the bass and drums so great, the drums has a good punching, the
bass make a weight of sound, good vocals too, the production and
arrangement, so excelent, good work, excellent job guys
- - jamsheriff from Lagos But Currently Based In M, Moscow,
Nigeria
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- Original
- Very Good, verry original. I really like what I heard. The vocals
are perfect. Nice job ladies.
- - fleuvio from Chestnut Ridge, New York
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- strong
- lead vocals very clear nice mix could hear everything sung in
song.
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- song vocals beat melody music all helped this song be a good one
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- production was good to my ears in this song
- - songmanmel from Gap, Pennsylvania
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- One for the kids
- Creates a modern sound from the start with very commercial voice
lacking a touch of soul but carrying the song well enough. The
production could do with some more depth as the track progresses and
found the 'hip hop' break down a bit tedious but i guess that kind of
thing is quite common these days. Would maybe appeal to a younger
audience as didnt find it very creative.
- - mainz from United Kingdom
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- RnB/Pop
- This reminds me of 90s RnB, which is a good thing. The lead vocals
are pretty good, I especially like the harmonic chords. I really like
marching band bridge part.The Overall production is pretty good, and
the song overall is pretty good the chorus is not very chatchy, but
keep up the good work.
- - doziern2 from Charleston, South Carolina
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- full of action
- im feeling this here mammi, its got a hyphy fell, but like some
gwen stephani mixed with JLO type shit going on. i must say, many cant
even encompass working all those things at one. the lead vocals are
good, but they use a lot more aggressiveness, sounds to calm, for the
level the beat is giving. the breakdown was good though, but
everything could be a little more wilder. the production was nice,
sound very professional. work on that, and get back to me.
- - SYRAMUSIC from Augusta, Georgia
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- hot 90's sound
- the bass is knockin in this song, the lady on the lead has a nice
voice, this sound reminds me of Paula Abdul, nice very nice, the music
is not outdated, but one listen and you can tell the sound is early
90-ish. the music is well put together though, I was groovin to their
song.
- - FLOE916 from Sacramento, California
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- Track
- The hook is solid but the production makes it sound a little
dated... the vocals are good..its more pop than R&B
- - Casely from Miami, Florida
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- BEAt IS ROCKING
- I am really liking the vibe to this song. Lead vocals are on point
and u are extremely confindent in your singing. Overall the song is
still missing that one thing to take it over the top!!!
- - KeithJacobs from Houston, Texas
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- Sing it!
- This song sounds professionally produced and the lead vocals are
strong and delivered with great emphasis and emotion.
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- Overall, I like it. I wish it was a bit longer with more verses
though I could do without the little break down at around the two
minute mark.
- - Kornika from Jacksonville, Florida
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- throwback
- This song sounds throwbackish, from like the late 80s or early
90s. Everything fits inside the song though.
- - S2IProductions from Fitchburg, Wisconsin
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- Freestyle
- 1.Lead vocals are a little weak, but they are decent could put
more emotion into it.
- 2.The song has a little freestyle flavor, but it works sound like
a j-lo song.
- 3.Production alright I like the beat and tempo.
- - fulldeckentertainment from Unspecified
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- Great Song..
- I like this song. The vocals are nice and so is the beat. This
song fits together very nice. This is a really good singer.
- - Pjax from Hyattsville, Maryland
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- go girl
- girl can SING! That's all i need to say about the vocals! Great
creative production, well written song, and good arrangement! I'll
probably being hearin this on the radio soon! way to go! oh, and love
the change up @ 2:40
- - TkEyS from Cotulla, Texas
- stacked
- the vocals are stacked too many times... there is no way to
distinguish the lead from the background vocal... the song doesn't
sound bad... and you have some talent... you kinda sound like
christina milian.... the song isn't bad... i just think you should
take away some of those stacks on your leads...
- - xlyric from Detroit, Michigan
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- come with it intro
- i'd like that song you're singing to me. do i look that good to
you? i'm a show you too..call me up some time...you want to hook up?
- good for a club song
- - Phillip_d12 from San Diego, California
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- Pop vocal/song that fits
- I think that the lead vocals have a definite pop tone and so this
song (because it's pop too) definitely fits. The deliver is what is
expected in pop. It's on pitch and the harmonies are tight. The
production is obviously not that high end but it works for the type of
song.
- - reneesebastian from San Francisco, California
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- NM's Review
- Lead vocals sounds good. The song sounds pretty good. Production
sounds very clear. It sounds good.
- - nickmatchewz78 from Stoneham, Massachusetts
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- B-
- Nice pop sound, I didn't think this fitted into the R&B genre like
you put it. This nice, it feels really teen pop, so I hope that is
your audience. I like the creative bridge you did.
- - esquiredre from Hyde Park, Massachusetts
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- reminds me of a danity kane
- Song is kind of popish, its alright. the lyrics are good and the
track is excellent
- - jeverett18 from Deltona, Florida
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- HOT BEAT
- THIS SONG IS NICE. THE WORD ARE GOOD. THE PRODUCTION IS CLEAR. IT
SEEMS TO BE A FUN SONG. IT MAKES YOU MOVE.
- - AMORERAYNE from Charleston, South Carolina
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- good look
- I love this song. I can hear it in a department store. I love the
beat. The vocals are hot. The sone is a hit. Production was done very
well. I would like to hear more of the lead vocals real voice. It
sound as if it is really beautiful. I think you have a hit on your
hands. Go get um. I cant wait to hear another one like this.
- - kevin_young7 from Charlotte, North Carolina
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- jippiayey!
- yeah! this song really gets my grooves going, *schwing!* it makes
me happy and willing to shake my tiny butt. The lead vocals are
stunning and defintly in the same league as lets say Pussycat Dolls.
The refrain sticks very good and the production is flawless. The only
thing that´s a bit sketchy is the ending. I like the piano! I´m going
to download this song fo schizzo!
- - Heronic from Sweden
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- Crazy!
- I love the beat of this one. Vocals are sweet and not too over the
top. I can hear this one right next to the PKD's. Keep it up.
- - BigBruce from Gaithersburg, Maryland
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- cool
- its tight nice tone and the song is fun
- - trevorh15 from Marietta, Georgia
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- pretty good vocal
- this singer has a nice voice, and i love the intro, but
unfortunately the track doesn't deliver. the song is lyrically and
melodically decent, but both could've been tighter with a little more
"outside the box" thought.
- - gyrl1da from Los Angeles, California
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- hmm`
- dont like the beat either or the lyrics but the voice is ok i like
parts of the songs
- - tightbeatz from Orlando, Florida
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- Sounds like Beyonce and the PussyCat dolls
- Lead Vocals: I don't know if you are trying to sound like Beyonce,
but the vocals are great. But try doing something different. Sounds
too much like what we all have heard
- Song: Over all the song was great
- production: Again sounds like something Beyonce would do or the
PussyCat Dolls
- - OO@2543654~Treal28 from Norcross, Georgia
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- Ok
- Overall a nice song. The vocals are ok. Production is good. This
song would make a good club song. Decent lyrics and hook.
- - Dem44Boyz from Riverdale, Georgia
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- Good Beat
- Vocals sound pretty good. I don't know why but this song reminds
me of old school Paula Abdul. The versus could be worked out a little
better. I like the chorus. This son is better than some stuff I have
heard on the radio. I give it an okay.
- - pietrographic from Richmond, Virginia
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- Nice beat
- This song was okay until around 2:10 and then the following
segment just threw off the whole song. I would perhaps suggest redoing
that portion without whatever that was in there .. kinda seemed like
it was trying to add some rap? Otherwise the vocal and melody were
good.
- - KenPetersen from Florence, Oregon
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- Shack it Out!
- The more you shack that thing the more I want to dance tell I
can't dance no more.
- - melvin_j11 from North West, Florida
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- Good mix nice tune
- Nice mix, good groove, good singing / harmonies and the song had a
nice lyric line that said something. The tune had direction and
offered an interesting break. The song did however sound like every
other R&B song I’ve heard. The little break is the only variable that
even slightly made it any different then 90% of all the other R&B
songs you hear. This one even sounded a little like late 80’s R&B
which is not really what I would think you would want if you’re
looking for a record deal.. With this being said It was a good song
just sounded a little dated and didn’t offer a strong enough hook to
separate it from all the other good R&B songs out there. I feel for ya,
cause standing out in this genre is dame hard to do.
- - jroystudios from Mandeville, Louisiana
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- Look Good also sounds good
- The producer made good use of effects like Auto Tune in certain
spots on the lead vocals. The vocalist has a contemporary, listenable
voice for this type of song. I wish a 16 bar bridge that took the song
in a totally diffrent direction would have been utilized after the 2nd
chorus. This would have added more dimenion to the song, and would
have made me more anxious to hear the chorus for a 3rd time. And it
would have lengthed the song by only 33 seconds. The song is
marketable and current with good, standard industry production.
Techniques like following the chorus melody with a synth lead line
adds more depth to the chorus. Over all, I think the song would stand
up in todays market with it's hook and melodies.
- - JTHOMAS60 from Tampa, Florida
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- Dang!!!
- You was deep on the bass at the opening. Jeep deep, Dang. Give a
little more of that. Nice dance song. That change in the middle is
funky. Hey I'm reviewing this at 7:20 in the morning it's too early to
be this funky dancing and swaying. But I like it. But it's too short
nowadays you may have to lengthen this for me. When you do send me a
copy.
- - sykes18 from Westchester, Illinois
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- Hot
- this is a club banger! Makes you want to dance from the very
beginning! The only complaint is I wish the vocals were a little
tighter.
- - thearmy from Unspecified
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- hot
- keep it up
- - knuckz from Far Rockaway, New York
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- J-Lo
- This would be a great dance track for jennifer Lopez, but this
singer does a GREAT job here....
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- Very commercial MTV/ radio ready, dance POP track, just right for
mass consumption...I like the rythym track and programming...Good song
idea...... !!!!!
- - XXXfunk from Concord, California
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- fun to listen to--uplifting
- - weaverintl from Mission Viejo, California
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- PoP
- Sounds very Manufactured. A Girl group if you will? I dunno. While
everything sounds Professional, the song has no Depth, and the
production is too ruff for what the vocalist is trying to acheive with
the PoP feel. Ok now your throwing the breakdown at me, Cool, almost
saves the song, but I personally would like to hear a different more
Urban feel like if you let Timbo get ahold of it. But its Solid no
doubt.
- - aczension from Las Vegas, Nevada
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- Excellent Job
- This beat is hot. The lyrics are hot. The vocals are hot. The
harmony is on point. Excellent job.
- - CelenaDacia from Detroit, Michigan
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- Club Joint
- Got that good dance beat...almost 80s feel! Vocals are a little
rough....need to be polished up a little. Maybe a little more vocal
training. Definately not bad....but not great. A little sloppy on the
delivery as well...need to be tightened up. Good song idea. Like the
switch up on the bridge/hook.
- - Bludshot from Wasington, Dc
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- Nice
- By using the "standard radio format" you were able to create a
good song. Starting with the chorus makes the song memorable.
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- Lead vocals are ok, you can really hear the in studio fixing that
was done to the vocal - which isnt a bad thing.
- - districtsix from Canada
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- Flatline Review
- This sounds like some P. Diddy girls. The vocals are very good and
its just a nice produced song. I love the song.
- - fdlco from Metairie, Louisiana
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- Innovative or Unoriginal
- Although this song may seem like a hit record in the making, it
has a very long way to go to actually make it to the top. In the
beginning, it's hard to tell whether it's a nu pop anthem or a
recycled Britney reject. The lyrics, however playful and bouncy, tend
to be rather repetitive after the first verse. The production is
really cool and makes the song more chewable, however it should be
reworked to sound less cheap and unofficial. However, with the
production and the smooth sultry vocals, the artist makes this song
ALMOST likeable, but has a long way to go to actually make some impact
into modern America's music.
- - flawsandall from Unspecified
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- typical
- that's the only word i can think of to describe this song. you
want him, you'll do what it takes, blah blah blah. heard it all
before. if you want to make an impact, bring something new. not being
critical but although you may have more experience and credentials
than me, i am a possible consumer and if i heard this song i would
say, "that's nice" and forget it. you have a nice voice, no doubt, but
this song does it no justice. it's so simple and there's really no
creativity in my opinion. i get the story which is good, i don't
remember the hook line which is not so good, but the beat is stuck in
my head which means either it's catchy or it's just because i listened
to it yesterday and remember it, which either way is a good thing.
sounds professional and clean. i'd dance to it but i couldn't take it
seriously.
- - kdahb from Roswell, Georgia
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- Poppin
- I like this song it has that 80's feel to it. I would buy this
song and play it while I'm working out.
- - MsDyzihre from Houston, Texas
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- Cool
- I like the vocals and the beat is hot. The content is good. Makes
me bounce my head when I hear it, but i didn't like the break down as
much. Keep it up
- - bigstlbeats from Dellwood, Missouri
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- 1-2-3-4- get loose now!
- rockin' track. nice. vocals fine. hook is perfect compliment to
track. girl, you in the house with this one. i see no reason this song
can't be compared to the other female superstars of this genre(i.e.,
ciara, aaliyah). i can see you with your baggy black pants,with about
10 dancers or so doing y'all's thing. song is nice. dance breakdown is
fitting. it would have been nice for vocalist to come out of the break
and really push the envelope with a few big notes but that's ok. the
song was good and refreshing.
- - hmmartin from Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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- Nice vYBZE
- Good vocals, could do with a bit of processing. Song words are
real to life. Productions sounds top quality, mix down sounding
crystal!
- - Sonaman from South London, United Kingdom
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- Upbeat Track
- Happy Track, nice beat, vocals are typical pop sounding, nice
delivery, Nice bridge, good song
- - DJNose from Washington, Dc
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- Professional production
- Very professional. Sounds like a pro recording. Like use of light
and shade in song and harmonies. If it lacks anything for me it's the
"hook" - the bit you go away singing. Don't particularly like
"Auto-tune" on lead vocal (personal choice) cos she sounds like she's
got a good voice anyway. Maybe vocals in chorus could come up a bit.
- - redave from London, United Kingdom
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- Review
- Hot! good tonal quality of lead vocals, nice production quality
and mixing, clever lyrics, good "B" section, catchy hook, makes me
wanna get up and move, ok, I think I will!...heyee....
- - DLPCA from Sacramento, California
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- GOOD
- I LIKE IT, IT SOUNDS GREAT IF YOU ARE AN INDIE SEND IT TO INFO@LAPRECORDS.ORG
AND THEY WILL PLAY IT ON THE RADIO
- - LLOYDLOPEZ from Riverside, California
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- yeah....I like!
- Lead vocals are very strong and solid, on key and lots of flavor.
The song has lots of potential because the lead singer has a very good
sound. Production is pretty good but could use a better mix, even the
vocals EQ could be better.
- - kfetti from Tarzana, California
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- Make me wanna Dance.
- This is a Jam. Almost like Fergie and Pussy Cat Dolls. There has
got to be a video in the works for this song. This song is ready right
now . Great Production Great Song!
- - TONIOSOUL from Burbank, California
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- Your song....
- 1. Lead Vocals...
- Dont do the song justice. Not that they are bad but they defintly
need more engineering and mix. Im only being harsh because the rest of
the song is flawless. Most likely it wont require anymore BOOTH time
just some more mixing and engineering.
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- 2. Song...
- A very good song. Cross genre for R&B and top40. This is gonna get
you more listeners than most. Nice bounce as well. I could see this at
the club fa sho.
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- 3. Production...
- Production is great. All levels sound fine, nothing too loud or
soft. Nice arrangement and selection of instruments.
- - pimpen_syn from Garland, Texas
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- This is creative.
- I like this songs style, lead vocals are good , the production is
not bad at all.
- - chibuikeomeaku from Inglewood, California
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- Hip is it
- Intro brings you right into the groove and the girls take over and
tell the story...nice
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- I was moooving to the beat straight out. Keys mixed just right
backing vocals too.
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- The drum program was a bit too heavy on the rolls but I'm picking.
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- The man comes back for his S A T line. I liked it.
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- - bcinbergen from Oakland, New Jersey
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- NICE
- IM FEELN THE BEGINNING AND I LIKE THE HOOK NICE VOICE I LIKE WHEN
SOMEONE SOUNDS LIKE THEY LOOK GOOD THATS ALWAYS A PLUS.GOOD SONG
- - yungjonz22 from New Orleans, Louisiana
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- WHIP
- I like the melody of the verse. The variations and ad-libs really
keep it interesting.
- The lead vocals are pretty strong, some times a little warbly
though.
- The production is really clean. I think I would really like it
with a real drummer though.
- The bass synth sound is really cool... Squishy.
- The vocal break is cool, maybe one more layer of a different
melody there would really make it.
- I like that the MC is brief, sounds good. I think the ending was a
little anti-climactic. Cool tune.
- - punkjazz180 from Northampton, Massachusetts
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- NICE TRACK
- I like the hook and the melody. Sounds like it has potential to
grow. Like the feel of the track. Sounds up to date and fresh.
- - brucelee_acemob from Aurora, North Carolina
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- Not too bad
- The singing is kool, the track sounds like R. Kelly version of
that song "Let's Straighten it out."
- - M_Harris from Lafayette, Louisiana
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- WHIP -
- Lead vocals, verse and production -
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- Great diction on all the vocals. I can hear everyone clearly in
the mix, good placement on both male and female vocals. Excellent use
of layering/stacking background female vocal parts.
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- On a side note, the drum beat is hot! except the breakdown on the
hi-hats at around 2:19 seconds needs something in there to replace the
hi-hat/shaker void as nothing else dropped out. Also I like how you
have the bass drum follow the Gm to Dm drop (the bass drum actually
changes depth on the Dm). I think the hats needs to calm down a little
on the verses.
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- The verse fits the style and flow of the song, which is similar to
the genesis of this song (interpolation ?) of an old skool cut "Let's
Straighten It Out" by Latimore. That song was an old soul cut with a
basic song structure (even though them cats was laying down some cool
licks on the keys and bass) but the lyrics on the verse were basic
enough to slide you right into the chorus. Your song takes that
approach and adds some nice pre-chorus lyrics into the mix and then
jumps to the chorus with the layered vocals.
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- Production wise I only have a few suggestions.
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- 1. Let the hi-hat/shaker take it easy on the verses to allow the
singer to speak her mind and be heard. By the time the pre-chorus
kicks in and the chorus comes the hi-hats can jump in because
everything else is up too.
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- 2. Kick the male spoken sections up further in the song instead of
near the end. They offer a nice balance between the layered female
vocals.
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- Overall, I enjoyed this song and would listen again.
- - Joliviet from Seattle, Washington
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- Nice jam
- Very cool jam. Cool instrumental parts. The snare fill is a little
to similar to that "Boom Boom Clap" song. The song grooves well. Drum
beat is cool overall, as well as the bass line, and they lock in very
well to eachother. Cool vocal harmony harmony parts around 2:10.
- - chrissevier from Nashville, Tennessee
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- nice work
- vocals are on fire yall the verses are well put together and the
production is strait period this is ready ready
- - Gslade from Wash. Dc, Dc
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- i like
- this is a good radio sound to beat singing well writing is not so
good
- the vocals are nice
- - KUNYBOYZ from Louisville, Kentucky
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- i had enough
- This is aaight, needs to be little bit louder singing. beat sounds
louder. But it got good lyrics. Vocals are great.
- - jeverett18 from Deltona, Florida
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- Clean and Professional Top 40 / R&B
- This song has Clean Professional Production work on the Beat &
Vocal Production.
- The Lead and Backing Vocals blend well in the Mix, and you can
hear the talent and energy in the Performance of everyone involved.
- The Verses fit with the Mood and add to the Melody of the song and
though not deep and reflective they seem to follow well with the
Chorus.
- Overall this track would play great on Top 40/R&B Radio, keep up
the great work.
- - MBragg from Columbus, Ohio
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- ok
- production is good she has great vocals/pipes but its like i've
heard this before its like every other song in this genre. but, what
the hell do i know.
- - cinwaves from Deerfield Beach, Florida
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- Mediocre
- Cool voice effect in the beginning. The women voices are good
(enough), points for that! They could be conceivably better though.
The woman's voice get's better in as the song goes on. The beginning
of the song needs to be improved, and some patchy spots. The song was
OK. Not good enough for me to listen for long. Nothing drew me or kept
me listening.
- - esquiredre from Hyde Park, Massachusetts
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- Sexy, Sexy.
- I wanna grab my woman now! Very hippy hoppy, I am bouncing in my
chair yow. Nice happy track. Beats, vocals, melody, and overall
production is nice.
- - RanJa from Jamaica, New York
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- Hot
- Melody right away grabbed me. Broke it down the verse...nice. Good
job of breaking up the verse/hook.
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- layers are good. im feeling this track. 5 stars on
verse/production. vocals are good.
- - get_crucified from Grand Rapids, Michigan
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- NEEDS A SOFTER MIX
- SINCE THE BEAT IS JAZZE PHA-ISH, THE VOCALS SHOULD BE ALIL WARMER.
REMINDS ME OF SOMETHING JENNIFER LOPEZ WOULD DO.
- - TheFlyestGansta from Richmond, Virginia
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- YEP
- I LIKE THIS ONE..THE TRACK IS GOOD..THE VOCALS ARE GOOD BUT GOOD
BE CLEANED UP A LITLE BIT..THE BRIDGE IS PRETTY SOLID..KEEP DOIN YA
THING..
- - ERBMUZIK from Tampa, Florida
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- This is Something Ready For BET
- BET has a way of making hits and this qualifies for the type of
songs that usually get shine. So here you score big. The lead vocals
are not as strong as the grove but will that stop this from being a
big hit? No... this has the components to be a 106 & Park/ Jennifer
Lopez top 10.
- - FWE from Brooklyn, New York
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- Fat Vocals (Phat)
- This is the missing Track Beyonce's CD needed.
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- A little too much chorus or doubling on the lead vocals.
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- The production and mix is fat, Just go back and remix the vocals
and make them sound as pro as the music does, then you have a HIT !!!
- - XXXfunk from Concord, California
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- W H I P
- The verse is dope it sounds very nice. The beat is a banger. The
production is awsome too. This is sounding good for rotation.
- - PoppaSim from Brooklyn, New York
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- Say it true and like it is. girl.
- Often there is much to do with nothing but that's only hafe the
story and the other hafe can only be the truth - be told. Yeah the
song rocks and tell's it like it is...and then some.
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- Great VOX
- This song sounds like the intro to another song (midnight train to
georgia). This is obviously a new song but when the intro is from
another song that I know, well, as a musician, I'd rather people think
of ME first when they hear the intro. But enough about that. Vocals
are good. Is it the same person? If not, you got a great back up -
sounds great with the lead. The sound is quality; good tone and great
performance. The song itself is a typical lovey dovey song - which I
loved when I was in my twenties - doesn't really appeal to me now. The
production is awesome - very professional. Your ending is very nice.
It is different than I would have expected.
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- btw - I'm a singer AND impressed with the vocals - so good job.
- - rashley from Saint Clair Shores, Michigan
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- Nice One
- Quitely we find ourselves trying to go at it by ourselves but
sometimes it's better done together. From the get go the beat was in
tempo and in sinc with each note and struck a chord of emotion.
- - melvin_j11 from North West, Florida
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- Cabrio music
- I can really imagine this, sounding from a bypassing cabrio .-)
Excellent vocals, catchy song, good production, perfect
- - sic from Goettingen, Nds., Germany
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- Ready for radio
- great radio ready production, it's a good POP song. lead vocals
are well performed and in tune...YEAH !!!
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- Since more pop artist are TRYING to be soulful and more R&B, this
would be a Good song for Jessica Simpson or even better MARIAH. LOVE
the change, great piano work and sequencing.
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- Love the ending with the pizzacato string arrangements...very cool
and creative..keep it up !!!
- - XXXfunk from Concord, California
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- Good Hook
- Its starts with a catchy hook and keeps delivering as the song
unfolds. The vocals are spot on and the keys tastefully compliment
them. Well done.
- - Haiko from Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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- CJknocks- Reviews
- The mood is very up beat, which is interesting because to lyrics
have a contrast. Thats what makes the song good, that your boo will
always be there and even if i'm down your up! Good song, Great
production, Sounds like TLC a few years back.
- - CJknocks from San Francisco, California
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- I like the piano and bass combo at the beggin..
- The lyrics go well with this and the singer sounds good. This has
a TLC feel to it, and I like the melody I like at the end the switch
up of melody and song it is good.
- - madskill from Pasadena, California
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- $$$
- i started bumping at first but the words are so bubblegum and
poppy that i stoppped, but many 13 year old girls in this country
would not, and that equals a hit i like the envouge like ending
- - windray1 from Minneapolis, Minnesota
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- Bopping my head
- Nice feel. Good job on the vocals, good engineering. Good riding
song with the window down. Overall this is a really good dance song.
That's a diferent way of ending a song. I like it. It was not
expected, a nice surprise.
- - sykes18 from Westchester, Illinois
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- Not SUre
- I'm not really sure where this one takes me? Lead Vocals--are OK,
nice backgroundz. But sounds like a demo more than an album cut or
something like that. No diss, just thats how it strikes me. Lead
vocalist has potential, but I think she's missing that originality
factor. The Song doesn't really do anything for me. With the
breakdown, I'm thinking professional Production, But the song in
general, just doesn't fancy my ear, tight outro tho, try again, I'm
sure you've got tighter jamz than this.
- - aczension from Las Vegas, Nevada
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- Pretty bland.
- The production is really nice as are the lyrics, but the vocals
are kinda off-key and it ruins the song in some parts.
- - flawsandall from Unspecified
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- i know
- the intro is groovin me already.
- I like this song. Female vocals is rockin this jam. You sound
really good. Lyrics are great.
- - jeverett18 from Deltona, Florida
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- Flatline Review
- This track is nice it sounds like a sample track of a old song. I
love it. The vocals are too good. You can really go some where this
song. I really love this one. You can reach out to Flatline Musik we
can maybe do a collabo.
- - fdlco from Metairie, Louisiana
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- Umm.
- Beautifull intro, I'm loving this beat. Interesting melody and
nice harmony. I'm really wondering though why you put a double on the
lead track and verse. It's not necessary with your outstanding vocals.
Just a thought.
- - CelenaDacia from Detroit, Michigan
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- good soun
- i like the sound on this one , probably and analog touch would be
helpfull, the lirucs are ok
- - sergioriglos from Miami, Florida
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- TLC
- The beat sounds keyboardish but it turns out to have a nice sound
after a while. This song sounds like TLC. Its a nice pop song. Well
written lyrics and nice sound from the vocalist. All TLC lovers should
dig this!
- - bigandskinny from Dallas, Texas
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- Pleasing Sounds
- Being very realistic this sounds like an artist that have been
singing before she was born, i like the sounds of the lead vocalist,
the song is nice i like it, its great, production , mmmm, well yeh its
good too.
- - Dontis from Allison, Kingston, Jamaica
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- Good Job
- Song is alright. I think if you were able to bring the chorus in
at 40 seconds it may make it more interesting. Vocals tend to stay at
the same level for most of the song, which makes the song sound
redundant. But its alright, has nice production.
- - districtsix from Canada
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- claps
- nice bounce here- kinda sounds like a hip hop song- kicks need a
little work- kinda cheezy...
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- singing is ok- but missed a little emotion-
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- ok guitars- set a decent mood...
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- piano kinda clashing with other parts of the song- might want to
eliminate that...
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- upbeat song does a have pretty good feel to it
- - KwameHaze from Houston, Texas
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- Nice sounds!
- Hey you asked so here it comes, I think you got a really cool song
but it may need some work in regards of the beat it sound a bit dry
for my taste but the song is really good, very catchy I like the voice
but I need to hear some solo voicing there....very cool song, but do
some more production work as well as some more work on those beats ,
maybe do some live stuff or theres also some goods samples and loops
that could do the work. Great voice arregements! The ending sound like
a bridge not as the end.
- - ELGRUVE from San Sivar, El Salvador
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- I don't like this.
- Production is whack, music is organized sound remember that, and a
song is supposed to build up correctly.
- - chibuikeomeaku from Inglewood, California
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- roll the credits
- nice feel good vibe instantly. dubs on vocals are actually cool.
they give more dimension to vocals almost as a vocal effect. nice
message.harmonies are nice. song sort of rolls together. from verse to
chorus but track allows that. bridge came right as i was wondering if
song would change directions. nice song overall. very feel good.
soundtrack material as well. especially after movie is about to end
and couple hs gotten whatever problems they had during movie worked
out, i could definitely hear this song rolling tthrough with credits.
good song.
- - hmmartin from Baton Rouge, Louisiana